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Corrections

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I've noticed a few mistakes as I've been here - nothing big, just things that (to me) are niggling bothers. Things like a missed letter or punctuation mark, or the wrong homophone.

Still, I feel like they bear mention so they can maybe be corrected.

The Chimera Curse Wrote:Enraged, Plythio cursed the woman to bare the children of the pairing and all others who slept together the previous night no matter their species as punishment for her disgrace of him.
This ought to be 'bear' instead of 'bare'.

Demons Blurb Wrote:...after turning to the dark side, their genetic make up made them different from those they once called brother and sister.
'Make up' ought to be hyphenated to 'make-up'.

Elves - Physical Abilities Wrote:ll elven species are agile and graceful in comparison to humans...
I... think those are lowercase Ls, suggesting the first word is meant to be 'all'? Regardless, this isn't right.

Elves - History Wrote:The second tear landed on the tree itself, boring the first Pren elf.
I think 'boring' was meant to be 'bearing'.

If I find more, I'll edit them into this post. I sincerely hope I haven't offended anybody with this.

Cheers, Calliope


Messages In This Thread
Corrections - by Calliope - 12-26-2017, 04:18 PM
RE: Corrections - by Achera - 12-26-2017, 05:44 PM
RE: Corrections - by Calliope - 12-26-2017, 06:06 PM
RE: Corrections - by Achera - 12-26-2017, 09:50 PM
RE: Corrections - by Calliope - 12-26-2017, 10:02 PM
RE: Corrections - by Calliope - 01-08-2018, 11:12 PM
RE: Corrections - by Kila - 01-09-2018, 02:20 PM
RE: Corrections - by xavols33333333 - 02-25-2024, 03:53 PM
RE: Corrections - by xavols33333333 - 03-01-2024, 03:48 PM

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