January 2018 Featured RPG

Happy 1st Birthday Antarsia! What better way to celebrate than with a newsletter full of updates? All of this and more can be found HERE. (January 08)

New updates! Check out a bunch of our new features in our newest newsletter found HERE. (November 06, 2017)

We're late! We're late! For a very important date! We hope you forgive us as we launch October's Newsletter and event!. Check it out HERE. (October 09, 2017)

New monthly updates! We have released a sea-themed expansion along with a bunch of other goodies. Go check them out HERE. (September 01, 2017)

A time skip has been established as well as more information on the plot. Find out more HERE. (August 13, 2017)

What's this? More new stuff? New items, new species, and more! Read more about it HERE. (July 30, 2017)

Gasp! We have a bunch of new shiny things for release including species, the plot, and a new skin! Read more about it HERE. (July 12, 2017)

The site is officially open : ) We have chibis being ordered later this week and will have a new species appearing soon! (January 01, 2017)

Zombies? Undead?! No! What are these things?! They look.... Alive?! HERE.
A third oracle has died! Aerithe, oracle of Zarkos, died publically in Prerio City square of what many believe to be suffocation. Read more about it HERE.
Disaster has struck at the Shrine of Jackroth! Find out what has happened to both oracle and God HERE.
Oh no the queen! Head over to the Enkratis packlands to find out what happened HERE.
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Corrections
In Which Spelling, Punctuation, and Grammar are Discussed
12-26-2017, 04:18 PM
#1
(This post was last modified: 12-26-2017, 04:36 PM by Calliope.)
I've noticed a few mistakes as I've been here - nothing big, just things that (to me) are niggling bothers. Things like a missed letter or punctuation mark, or the wrong homophone.

Still, I feel like they bear mention so they can maybe be corrected.

The Chimera Curse Wrote:Enraged, Plythio cursed the woman to bare the children of the pairing and all others who slept together the previous night no matter their species as punishment for her disgrace of him.
This ought to be 'bear' instead of 'bare'.

Demons Blurb Wrote:...after turning to the dark side, their genetic make up made them different from those they once called brother and sister.
'Make up' ought to be hyphenated to 'make-up'.

Elves - Physical Abilities Wrote:ll elven species are agile and graceful in comparison to humans...
I... think those are lowercase Ls, suggesting the first word is meant to be 'all'? Regardless, this isn't right.

Elves - History Wrote:The second tear landed on the tree itself, boring the first Pren elf.
I think 'boring' was meant to be 'bearing'.

If I find more, I'll edit them into this post. I sincerely hope I haven't offended anybody with this.

Cheers, Calliope
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12-26-2017, 05:44 PM
#2
ACCEPTED: PENDING EDITS

Staff has acknowledged this and will be making the appropriate edits. 
Thank you for bringing these to staff's attention!
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12-26-2017, 06:06 PM
#3
Thank you so much, Era. I'd hate to be a bother, but I do like knowing that errors'll get fixed if they're pointed out.

Cheers!
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12-26-2017, 09:50 PM
#4
All suggested corrections have been updated.
Thank you once more!
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12-26-2017, 10:02 PM
#5
Thank you for being so on top of it.
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01-08-2018, 11:12 PM
#6
I found another... I should maybe stop reading species entries.

Kelahati History Wrote:So, Jiasna went to Tharamos who she knew would appreciate a phrank more than any of the other gods.
One, 'phrank' ought to be 'prank'. Two, there ought to be a comma after Tharamos.

Cheers, Calliope
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01-09-2018, 02:20 PM
#7
Aaaand fixed!
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